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Chicago is considered to be one of the best cities in america. Due to its sports teams, great foods, and tourist attraction. A lot of people dream of being here. Let me be the first to tell you that Chicago is not what its hyped up to be. The first reason why Chicago is considered to be a bad city is due to its very high crime rate. Chicago also experience extreme cold and hot weather. lastly Chicago’s police department is very corrupt.

Let’s begin with the crime rate in Chicago. Chicago has a very bad and long history of violence. Down to the drugs, murders, rape cases, muggings, robberies, gun violence, assaults, and human trafficking chicago holds some of the most Horrifying stories. Depending on the area you choose to live in there are always things to look out for in Chicago. There is no where in Chicago that could be considered as a safe zone. Chicagoans will warn you  to always look over your shoulder while walking. It’s a gamble every time you decided to leave out of the comfort of your home and in most cases inside of your hone as well. These are just some of the things that makes Chicago one of the worst cities to live in.

 

Chicago could be either extremely hot or extremely cold. The hottest weather Chicago experienced was 109 degrees July 24th 1934. That’s really hot if you ask me Chicago’s summer days are filled with sweaty brows and under arms. Most people have a hard time staying cool and in some cases that cause health issues. Chicago is also known for its extremely brutal winds and in the winter season that very wind will tear you apart if you are not dressed appropriately.  Chicago’s coldest temperature was a -27 degrees January 20th 1985. This extreme cold can also cause health issues as well.

Lastly Chicago’s Police Department is very corrupt. Chicago is known for very malicious police officers and in most cases they end up with blood on their hands. Chicago police officers are known for planting drugs and weapons on innocent citizens just to meet their quotas. Some if Chicago’s policemen and/or policewomen are very racist and will hold you up just because of the color of your skin or because of the area you are in.

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  1. “Chicago is considered to be one of the best cities in america. Due to its sports teams, great foods, and tourist attraction.” –this should be one sentence; the second group of words (Due to…) is a dependent clause, and so it can not be a sentence by itself.

    Please run this essay through http://www.paperrater.com and follow any suggestions it may have concerning spelling and grammar.

    The readability looks ok (10.84), but it seems your sentences could use a few more words to raise the average words per sentence….

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